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The Outsiders

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One by one my friends fall down
Each more helpless than the one before
Johnny had never left town
Not until he evened the score,
And the soc went tumbling to the ground.
The fire was the end of him and those kids are the ones he fell for.

Dally was not the same,
He had been in and out of jail.
He had already lost his aim,
But then he turned away from the trail.
Lifted the magazine and down he came,
One bullet after the next, into him like nails.

I don’t know when times got rough,
Somehow things just didn’t go my way.
Their blue Mustang was looking really tuff,
But, Bob had no idea Johnny would take his life away.
The day the church went down was enough,
Because it was then I realized—“nothing gold can stay”.
This is a poem that I wrote from Ponyboy's point of view (if you've read/ seen The Outsiders then you know who I'm referring to) about his friends who died and all the shitty stuff that he went through. A lot of the random lines are kinda odd being that they provide no purpose other than to fill space until I get to the more "deep" lines. O well. I like this poem OK, but I wanna know what you think. haha It needs work though.....
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CrazyFanOfMostStuff's avatar
Oh my gosh this is a really good poem. I'm working on the book in class currently. And I loved the beginning so much I finished the book the week I got it!